Job Application

Dear teachers and everyone,

The following is found in a job application:

1. I am seeking a position as a social worker in an organisation where I can use my 33 years of experience in counselling and investigation, together with my experience in teaching frontline officers laws, sociology and criminology.

I was wondering whether the above could be recast as follows:

2. I am seeking a position as a social worker in an organisation where I can use my 33 years of experience in counselling and investigation, and in teaching frontline officers laws, sociology and criminology.

3. I am seeking a position as a social worker in an organisation where I can use my 33 years of experience in counselling, investigation, and teaching frontline officers laws, sociology and criminology.

Thank you very much.