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Antonija Posted 20 years ago
Business & Finance

job application

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01i00Dear Sir/Madam,02i02br
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01i00I saw your advertisement for a medical representative in XY newspapers, issued on 00. I am very interested in the job because I enjoy working with people and I have the required communication skills, as well as many of the necessary qualifications.02i02br
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01i00I was born on 00 in XY. I graduated from high school in 1997. I graduated from the 00 00 in November 2004 and I took medical exam in May 2005. I have a valid driving licence (B cat.) and I speak English fluently and have passive knowledge of Italian language. Although I have never worked as a medical representative, I have been in medical practice for almost two years – one year during my internship and eight months working as a general practitioner (still working). 02i02br
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01i00 00I am very interested in the position and I hope you will consider my application. I am looking forward to meeting you.02i02br
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01i00Yours faithfully,02i02br
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01i00XY, M.D.02i02br
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0Hi Antonija,02br 02br 00I'm not sure if you realize that you need to include with this 'cover letter' a copy of 'your' resume or CV. The letter should thus just focus on the highlights of your application. You have too many mundane details here.

  • 0Hi Antonija,02br 02br 00I'm not sure if you realize that you need to include with this 'cover letter' a copy of 'your' resume or CV.
  • The letter should thus just focus on the highlights of your application.
  • You have too many mundane details here.
  • Think about what the employer wants.
  • eg Can she sell?
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0Hi Antonija,02br
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00I'm not sure if you realize that you need to include with this 'cover letter' a copy of 'your' resume or CV. The letter should thus just focus on the highlights of your application. You have too many mundane details here. Think about what the employer wants. eg Can she sell? Can she work independently? Can she learn about new products quickly? 02br
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0 Thank you Clive. 0-

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