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Israfil Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Joan Jett

What is the grammatically problems in my new work " Joan Jett":

"1: Joan Jett."
"2: How much Joan is beautiful."
"3: Her beauty like the Roman power."
"4: O God."
"5: As you saying, 'Roman defeated the other nation and won.'"
"6: Her beauty from you."
"7: Her beauty defeated the ugly words."
"8: O God."
"9: My words may be a normal words."
"10: My words may be a satanic words."
"11: My Words may be a new gospel."
"12: O God."
"13: Can you understand her beauty."
"14: How much Joan is beautiful."
"15: Her beauty like the Roman power."
  

Top answer

Please put your work into paragraph form for proper analysis. Delete all the numbers and quotation marks, which just make it more difficult to consider.

  • Please put your work into paragraph form for proper analysis.
  • Delete all the numbers and quotation marks, which just make it more difficult to consider.
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Please put your work into paragraph form for proper analysis. Delete all the numbers and quotation marks, which just make it more difficult to consider.
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Please put your work into paragraph form for proper analysis. Delete all the numbers and quotation marks, which just make it more difficult to consider.
I'm so sorry, I didnt know well what is the paragraph form, now what about this:

Joan Jett.
How much Joan is beautiful.
Her beauty like the Roman power.
O ***.
As you saying, 'Roman defea
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A paragraph looks like this:

In many languages, the fundamental unit of composition is the paragraph. A paragraph consists of several sentences that are grouped together. This group of sentences together discuss one main subject. In U.S. formal academic English, paragraphs have three principal parts. These three parts are the topic sentence, body sentences, and the concludi
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I had tried now to make it like the paragraph form, what about this:

Joan Jett. How much Joan is beautiful. Her beauty like the Roman power. O ***. As you saying, 'Roman defeated the other nation and won. Her beauty from you. Her beauty defeated the ugly words. O ***. My words may be a normal words. My words may be a satanic words. My Words may be a new gospel. O ***. Can you
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Yes, that is the way you should present your writing, Israfil. Now:

Joan Jett

How beautiful Joan is! Her beauty is like Roman power. O God, as you say, 'The Romans defeated all the other nations. Her beauty came from You. Her beauty defeats rough words. O God, my words may
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Thank you for your help. The work like a try to make a literary work.

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