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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Japan, not safely country now?

0 00Would you please point out my errors. Thank you.00So many days we hear the news of murder, not safety enough to let our child playing around themselves now days. This is so much different from the days of my childhood. This is one of the reason why some marriage couples hesitate to have their children. Still, better if compare to US safety level, too much murder that is why not all the cases are on the new. Whole the world is getting worse and worse? Some places have war problem, things are much different in such area. Society getting complicated, increasing the number of mental health patient and suicide.00 00Things are much simple in 20 years ago, you just keep working at the same company and doing same job, normally, you do not have to worry about anything. Society changed, you have to keep yourself winner in winners - losers battle field. I was kind of shocked when I watch the movie “fight club” and “the beach”. As for my recognition, Hollywood starts never play the role in these little complicated/confused movies before. These are definitely not horror movies, but generally little creasy ones? Who can say he/she is creasy since almost all of us are sort of creasy?02br
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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 00So many days we hear 01u 00the news02u 00 of 01u 00murder, not safety02u 00 enough to let our child 01u 00playing02u 00 01u 00around themselves now days02u 00. This is so much different from the days of my childhood. 01u 00 Still, better02u 00 if01u 00 compare02u 00 to US safety 01u 00level, too 02u 00much 01u 00murder that 02u 00is why not all the cases are on the 01u 00new02u 00.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 02br 02br 01span 02span 01span 00So many days we hear 01u 00the news02u 00 of 01u 00murder, not safety02u 00 enough to let our child 01u 00playing02u 00 01u 00around themselves now days02u 00.
  • This is so much different from the days of my childhood.
  • 01u 00 Still, better02u 00 if01u 00 compare02u 00 to US safety 01u 00level, too 02u 00much 01u 00murder that 02u 00is why not all the cases are on the 01u 00new02u 00.
  • 02u 00 Some places have war 01u 00problem, things02u 00 are much different 01u 00in such area02u 00.
  • 00 00Things 01u 00are02u 00 much01u 00 simple02u 00 01del 00in02del 00 20 years 01u 00ago, you02u 00 just 01u 00keep02u 00 working at the same company and 01u 00doing same02u 00 01u 00job, normally02u 00, you 01u 00do02u 00 not have to worry about anything.
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