Jane, the accuser.
Please correct my mistakes in this piece of writing.
Jane was so angry to see her committing the same conviction again, at least she thought it was, but instead of interrupting her this time she went back and came again sneaking into her bedroom with her mother's smart phone; took her picture. She was surprised by the flush of the camera; she left everything and stood up without saying a word. Jane had been catching her doing this for the last seven days but no body believed her.
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Don't overdo the semicolon. Jane was so angry to see her committing the same conviction (That is completely the wrong word. ) again, at least she thought it was, but instead of interrupting her this time she went back and came again sneaking into her bedroom with her mother's smart phon e; took her picture.
- Don't overdo the semicolon.
- Jane was so angry to see her committing the same conviction (That is completely the wrong word.
- ) again, at least she thought it was, but instead of interrupting her this time she went back and came again sneaking into her bedroom with her mother's smart phon e; took her picture.
- (This sentence is too long.
- ) She was surprised by the flush (wrong word) of the camer a; sh e left everything and stood up without saying a word.
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Don't overdo the semicolon.
Jane was so angry to see her committing the same conviction (That is completely the wrong word. A conviction is the end of a process of sentencing a criminal in court.) Some appropriate words are offense, crime, misdeed, act of ...) again, at least she thought it was, but instead of interrupting her this
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