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Mikroacse Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

I've written a letter to my pen-friend. May you check it?

Hello! I've written a letter to my pen-friend, but i know that it contains many mistakes. May you check it and fix them?
"Dear Jane,
Hello! How are you? I’ve just got your last letter. You told that you have problems at studying French. Also, you added, that the lessons are tiresome for you. I know you like Math and History more than French, but studying foreign language can also be interesting.
Of course, studying foreign language is important. It gives you an opportunity to travel across the world, speak with people around the world, and share information. So, in my opinion, it’s very important to know foreign language(s).
For example, I can tell you about language lessons in our school. I think, studying foreign language begins from teacher. Our teacher is very clever and smart. She can give us a knowledge, that we can’t study ourselves because of laziness. She uses different methodic of teaching, transforming boring studying of a language into a game. So, lessons of foreign language in our school are very interesting.
I can give you several advices to make your studying more exciting. Firstly, find abilities where you can use the foreign language. Maybe, you want to go to Paris? Or speak with French native speakers? If something of these true, we may continue. Secondly, don’t limit your studying in lessons. Watch films, read books and websites in the language.
So, now you know how to make your study more interesting. Don’t forget to send me your results!
Best wishes, Vitaliy."

Thanks!!
  

Top answer

Send your letter just as it is without further delay, Vitaliy. You're not trying to pass an exam or win some sort of prize. There's not a lot wrong with it, anyway.

  • Send your letter just as it is without further delay, Vitaliy.
  • You're not trying to pass an exam or win some sort of prize.
  • There's not a lot wrong with it, anyway.
  • Jane won't care about your mistakes — she just wants to hear from you.
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Send your letter just as it is without further delay, Vitaliy. You're not trying to pass an exam or win some sort of prize.

There's not a lot wrong with it, anyway.

Jane won't care about your mistakes — she just wants to hear from you.

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