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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Letter Writing
I've no-one to read my motivation letter :][
Hello, I'm sorry to pollute this forum with yet an another motivation letter, but I'm not english and none of my friends are. Practically no-one can read my LoM to comment and I've been through it way too many times. Could someone please give ANY feedback?
Oh and I have no idea who the "sir/madam" may be, as this is for a web recruitment-form.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to submit my application for an IT job in ---your-company---.
I have been studying informatics at the University ------------- for the past two years and have come to like my major a lot. I am really interested in this field and am successful at it. Programming has evolved into a hobby for me. Whether it is making modifications for computer games, or writing small programs to automate tedious everyday tasks, I get quite a lot of amusement from it. Furthermore, coding isn’t my only strong side. Networking is one of my favorite subjects too; however no education is complete without experience.
I was very thrilled to learn about Your corporation and that it hired employees to work at -client_ompany-. Having a position there, would be my best imaginable job currently. Not to even mention the obvious benefits, (a job that is closely related to my major; working for a prosperous international corporation) it is my former place of employment. I have previously worked as an operator at -client_ompany- for half a year. I quit, however, because the job was dull and repetitive. I loved the atmosphere and it was very near where I live, but the job had hardly anything for me to offer. Neither was I actually looking for something; mainly I just wanted to try myself out.
That, on the other hand, is not the case now. I wish to start my career and this seems to be the best opportunity.
If you would consider hiring me, I know I would prove a worthwhile investment. As I have mentioned, I am accustomed with the specific software -client_ompany- uses, so the learning curve would be much easier. I am sure to satisfy and overwhelm your expectations should you give me a chance. I feel confident, able and stubborn enough to take on any task and bring it to completion.
Hopefully looking forward to your positive reply,
Oh and I have no idea who the "sir/madam" may be, as this is for a web recruitment-form.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to submit my application for an IT job in ---your-company---.
I have been studying informatics at the University ------------- for the past two years and have come to like my major a lot. I am really interested in this field and am successful at it. Programming has evolved into a hobby for me. Whether it is making modifications for computer games, or writing small programs to automate tedious everyday tasks, I get quite a lot of amusement from it. Furthermore, coding isn’t my only strong side. Networking is one of my favorite subjects too; however no education is complete without experience.
I was very thrilled to learn about Your corporation and that it hired employees to work at -
That, on the other hand, is not the case now. I wish to start my career and this seems to be the best opportunity.
If you would consider hiring me, I know I would prove a worthwhile investment. As I have mentioned, I am accustomed with the specific software -
Hopefully looking forward to your positive reply,
Top answer
I have cut out the entire section of your previous unfortunate employment with that company; do not mention that until the interview. I have also eliminated some repititions of eagerness and desire-- these become tedious to the reader. What is left (below), accompanying your curriculum vitae, should be sufficient: Dear Sir or Madam : I would like to submit my application for an IT position with ---your-company---.
- I have cut out the entire section of your previous unfortunate employment with that company; do not mention that until the interview.
- I have also eliminated some repititions of eagerness and desire-- these become tedious to the reader.
- What is left (below), accompanying your curriculum vitae, should be sufficient: Dear Sir or Madam : I would like to submit my application for an IT position with ---your-company---.
- I have been studying informatics at the University of ------------- for the past two years.
- I am particularly interested in this field and I think I am proficient at it.
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I have cut out the entire section of your previous unfortunate employment with that company; do not mention that until the interview. I have also eliminated some repititions of eagerness and desire-- these become tedious to the reader. What is left (below), accompanying your curriculum vitae, should be sufficient:
Dear Sir or Madam:
I would like to submit my applica
Dear Sir or Madam:
I would like to submit my applica
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I have cut out the entire section of your previous unfortunate employment with that company; do not mention that until the interview.
Well I woudn't call it unfortunate, I just worked for the same company some time ago and that was important to point out IMO. It was a lame job BTW, I worked mainly for the money (I'm a student). It had no career oportunities, no bonuses, no nothing
Well I woudn't call it unfortunate, I just worked for the same company some time ago and that was important to point out IMO. It was a lame job BTW, I worked mainly for the money (I'm a student). It had no career oportunities, no bonuses, no nothing
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