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Keam Posted 20 years ago
I've never been good enough!
Hey everyone!! I've never been good enough to finish a good poem, so I hope you like these little pieces of them.
You never thow away a symphony, you just notice that the instruments weren´t the ones to play the sonet of your life...
Because the symphony that we were creating together stoped having that romantic melody in which it started and without music in the soul there is no rythm for the beat of a heart...
If by the moment in which I close my eyes you could stay with me for ever, it would be beautiful to be blind...
Don't lie, you know me,
Don't try me, I'm sincere,
Don't show love, make love,
Don't judge, there's a soul that put us together
Don't ask me for time, we have an eternity,
Don't change me, we're art,
Don't undressed me, listen to me,
Don't talk to me, look at me,
Don't have secrets, we're in this together,
I'm not yours, we're one...
There's no reason to reafirm this, but there's only YOU&ME!!!
You never thow away a symphony, you just notice that the instruments weren´t the ones to play the sonet of your life...
Because the symphony that we were creating together stoped having that romantic melody in which it started and without music in the soul there is no rythm for the beat of a heart...
If by the moment in which I close my eyes you could stay with me for ever, it would be beautiful to be blind...
Don't lie, you know me,
Don't try me, I'm sincere,
Don't show love, make love,
Don't judge, there's a soul that put us together
Don't ask me for time, we have an eternity,
Don't change me, we're art,
Don't undressed me, listen to me,
Don't talk to me, look at me,
Don't have secrets, we're in this together,
I'm not yours, we're one...
There's no reason to reafirm this, but there's only YOU&ME!!!
Top answer
why i sense selfishness in ur poem??? u love someone but u WANT this person to completely pay attention to u. ) Dont ask me for time, we have an eternity (r u sure?
- why i sense selfishness in ur poem???
- u love someone but u WANT this person to completely pay attention to u.
- ) Dont ask me for time, we have an eternity (r u sure?
- ) I'm not yours, we're one (WHAT????
- ) YOU and ME (good emphasizing ) PS: I like ur poem!
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why i sense selfishness in ur poem??? u love someone but u WANT this person to completely pay attention to u.
don't lie (which is good,ppl love honesty) you know me (sounds like u wanna emphasize that this person MUST know u)
Dont try me (i agree) I'm sincere (that's what u thought!)
Dont show love (love is so abstract,the person only could s
don't lie (which is good,ppl love honesty) you know me (sounds like u wanna emphasize that this person MUST know u)
Dont try me (i agree) I'm sincere (that's what u thought!)
Dont show love (love is so abstract,the person only could s
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