I've given my opinion about sentences need to know if OK??

Question

Could you please help me with these? I put in bold what I think.

I came down on my ankle hard and sprained it as my shoes were undone and my ankle not protected. I'm not sure
You don't drive as fast in reverse as you do forward. FORWARD NO
What do you think it was that he wanted to say? OK
Im 30th out of 55. I'm 15th from the end. (can you say the second clause when talking about a tournament)
Look what you're making me do./you make me do. BOTH Making is specific / make is general
I'll have a better standard of living in a third word country on this salary. Not sure
Every time someone loses, the remaining player are happier and happier. how would you say it?
The edge of the digital clock on the screen is as far from the top part of the screen as the side of the screen. (computer screen)
I don't remember which acotr is in which episode/what episode. Both
The cap fits over/on the cap perfectly. ON
I'm not as tired as usual. OK
Associating himself with the NBA was a good move on his part.
You have a harder time tell whether its centered or not.

Thank you