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Rommel Posted 9 years ago
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I've correctly used 'through which' and 'with as much...as' in the statement, haven't I?

I've correctly used 'through which' and 'with as much...as' in the statement, haven't I?

To Joseph, connecting with the world means using social networking sites, mobile phones, and e-mails, through which he could express their thoughts and feelings with as much freedom as possible.

  

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"through which" is correct. "with as much freedom as possible" is correct English, but in this context I don't really what "as possible" is measured relative to or limited by. The tenses "means ...

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  • "through which" is correct.
  • "with as much freedom as possible" is correct English, but in this context I don't really what "as possible" is measured relative to or limited by.
  • The tenses "means ...
  • could" are mismatched, and "their" should be "his".
  • I suggest: To Joseph, connecting with the world means using social networking sites, mobile phones, and e-mails, through which he can freely express his thoughts and feelings.
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"through which" is correct. "with as much freedom as possible" is correct English, but in this context I don't really what "as possible" is measured relative to or limited by. The tenses "means ... could" are mismatched, and "their" should be "his". I suggest:

To Joseph, connecting with the world means using social networking sites, mobile phones, and e-mails, through which he can

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