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Rommel Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

I've correctly used 'many' in the sentence, haven't I?

I've correctly used 'many' in the sentence, haven't I?

Dr. Jackson has stated that the total food intake of many Peruvian children has remained inadequate.

  

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It's okay, but you might want to consider adding "individual" after "many" for clarity.

  • It's okay, but you might want to consider adding "individual" after "many" for clarity.
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It's okay, but you might want to consider adding "individual" after "many" for clarity.

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