It's urgency. Help me to check my gramma please!

0It was 6.00 am. on a Saturday morning and I was in my car driving around 00. The sun was raising and daylight was replacing by street lights. We went to Hua Hin by two days and one night. Some of the weekends, my family likes to relax at Hua Hin.02br
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00Driving only a few hours from 00, my father took us to Hua Hin by safety. Actually, my family brought one of the condominium's room00 at here. My youngest sister and I spent most of the afternoon with games such as table tennis and computer games. My parents would be in another room taking a rest.02br
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00 00I had dinner with my family at a seafood restaurant that near my accommodation. After that, we left the seafood restaurant and walk towards to the night market. In the evening, street comes alive with both Thai and foreigners especially, on weekend. The night market fulls of lights from shops. Two sides of pavement have folding tables, street vendors including modern shops. The crowds are all over the night market. Tourists enjoy a variety of foods; fresh seafoods, fried noodles, beverages, Thai desserts and the international foods. Most sellers call for tourists to buy their products that are hand-made goods, Thai’s style clothes or interesting souvenirs. Accordingly, 00I brought a box of fancy candle to give to one of my friend for Christmas present. When I come back to my room, I sat on a white chair at my terrace. 00I sat there for a few moments in silence, thinking of nothing, and listening to the sound of the wind that brought the scent of the sea. Accordingly, I went to bed late of the night.02br
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00The next morning, after a refreshing sleep, we were having breakfast by a huge amount of fried egg, omelet,00 00sausage00,00 and delicious sandwich. After breakfast, we would make a merit, putting food into the monks’ bowl. 00My mother strongly believed that we should make merit regularly as it would bring 00happiness, successes and 00blessedness00.02br
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