Hi everyone.<br/>I'm studying English and I wrote some sentences in English.<br/>but I'm not sure whetherit corrects or not.<br/><br/>can anyone check it and change it smoothly?<br/><br/>here it is..<br/><br/>1.<br/><br/>Ever since I was young, I was always interested in computer programming.<br/>I counld't forget the moment when I met pc face to face at first time.<br/><br/>Since then, I have a dream of being a computer programmer.<br/>I believe that this is what I've done and what I am doing now and what I am goind to do<br/><br/>2.<br/><br/>What is essential is invisible to the eyes.<br/><br/>I quote it from The Little Prince which is one of the most favorite sentences ever.<br/><br/>Superficial things are not going to last long.<br/><br/>Expensive cars and a lot of mony don't make us happy forever.<br/><br/>If we desire it, Our heart will become wasted.<br/><br/>Loving someone, Having and sharing time with someone who really loves you is more important than anything<br/><br/>We can't see it . but We can feel it and It can makes us happy forever<br/><br/>Just close your eyes and Imagine of your family, friends, lover and most precious time in your life.<br/><br/>You can see it without opening your eyes.<br/><br/>What is essential is invisible to the eyes.<br/><br/>Even though I am a grown-up, I always want to live like a child who has a pure mind.<br/><br/>As the Little Prince did..