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Chameleon Upadhyaya Posted 12 years ago
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It would be great if someone correct this paragraph of my business proposal

Our prior targeted client’s area would be Asia right now. Telecom Operators in Asia has a major communication market share whereas they are rapidly increasing their services and coverage area each year and they are receiving the million of call minutes from outside country every day. Prospective company would like to terminate calls from foreign country via local telecom operators in Asia first and then gradually increases its presence in the international level.
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VOIP and telecom routes business is restricted in a few countries of Aisa and Middle East by their governments. But major countries have an open market policy when it comes to telecommunication and career service business. Considering the facts above that the best country to register this business is Hong Kong. If we register the business in Hong Kong the tax option is quiet liberal over there
  

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Chameleon Upadhyaya Our prior targeted client’s area would be Asia right now. I don't understand this sentence. "Prior' means before or earlier.

  • Chameleon Upadhyaya Our prior targeted client’s area would be Asia right now.
  • I don't understand this sentence.
  • "Prior' means before or earlier.
  • "Right now" means currently or presently.
  • Chameleon Upadhyaya Telecom Operators in Asia has a major communication market share whereas they are rapidly increasing their services and coverage area each year and they are receiving the million of call minutes from outside country every day.
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Chameleon UpadhyayaOur prior targeted client’s area would be Asia right now.
I don't understand this sentence. "Prior' means before or earlier. "Right now" means currently or presently.
Chameleon UpadhyayaTelecom Operators in Asia has a major communication market share whereas they are rapidly increasing their services and coverage area
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Thank you for your effort A :

I have put Prior as "priority" " current priority.

terminate is a technical word, hence it is call landing not disconnection, for instance call origination and termination, ( origination = outgoing, termination is incoming)

Let me write this sentence again
The prospective company would like to terminate (land) calls fr
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Chameleon Upadhyayaterminate is a technical word, hence it is call landing not disconnection, for instance call origination and termination, ( origination = outgoing, termination is incoming)
Then you have to be more clear about what your company will do exactly. Is it going to install fibre optic cables with specific termination points? Or will it just rout
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Nop we will terminate the calls leasing the switches server located in USA. the method of termination is IP (Internet Protocol ) to IP by interconnecting between various operators.
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A I have one more paragraph to correct, can you help me ?

VOIP and telecom routes business is restricted in a few countries of Aisa and Middle East by their governments. But major countries have an open market policy when it comes to telecommunication and career service business. Considering the facts above the best country to register this business is Hong Kong. If we register the busin
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Sorry to be so naive. In my non-technical mind, a telephone call to me terminates (reaches its end-point) at my local IP address or my physical telephone appliance, not somewhere in the middle.

VOIP and telecom routes ("routes" seems to be a verb, and it does not make sense here.) business is restricted in a few countries of Aisa and
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Sorry its Asia

Here "Routes" single routes multiple routes is plular noun. I.e.Telecom routes, grey routes, white routes, premium routes..

Its restricted hence its illegal only authorized telcom can receive the calls from outside their countries. But routes trading company like us cant terminate calls in most of the middle east countries and asain countries i mean that
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Chameleon UpadhyayaHere "Routes" single routes multiple routes is plular noun. I.e.Telecom routes, grey routes, white routes, premium routes..
In this case I would call the business one of these: "telecom routing business" (managing the routing of packets or calls), or "telecom infrastructure business" (providing and managing the infrastructure) or telecom ro

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