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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

it was not until... when..

" It was not until the late 1970s when the nativist literary debates became a phenomenon that these writers and their writings rose to take a dominant role in the literary domain."

could anyone help me to fix this sentence? I am not sure if this is a correct and clear sentence.
  

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" could anyone help me to fix this sentence? I am not sure if this is a correct and clear sentence. It's not bad.

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  • I am not sure if this is a correct and clear sentence.
  • It's not bad.
  • I'd add a little punctuation to help the reader see the meaning more easily.
  • I'd delete 'and their writings'.
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Hi,
" It was not until the late 1970s, when the nativist literary debates became a phenomenon, that these writers and their writings rose to take a dominant role in the literary domain."

could anyone help me to fix this sentence? I am not sure if this is a correct and clear sentence.

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