It takes the pure to see the lord
Is this lyrics grammatically correct?
"Purer, pure and pure in heart
It takes the pure to see the lord"
I think it should be 'purity' but it doesn't sound well to me.
I need something that will fit in 8 syllables.
Top answer
I am not sure what the first line is trying to say. I would re-write it. " As for the second, also re-write because "It takes the pure" is not clear either.
- I am not sure what the first line is trying to say.
- I would re-write it.
- " As for the second, also re-write because "It takes the pure" is not clear either.
- The second line is easy to fix.
- For example, you could say: Only the pure can see the Lord.
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I am not sure what the first line is trying to say. I would re-write it. Perhaps keeping "the pure in heart." As for the second, also re-write because "It takes the pure" is not clear either. The second line is easy to fix. For example, you could say:
Only the pure can see the Lord. (8 syllables, iambic meter.)
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Your question is not grammatically correct. This is
The pure of heart can see the lord,
Clear as truth in a life of faith...
Loving kindness leads them forward,
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