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Aniie415 Posted 7 years ago
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It is the correct English sentence, isn't it?

my computer was run down, it loads slowly

  

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aniie415 It is the a correct English sentence, isn't it? No, not exactly. For one thing, you need to start with a capital letter and end with a period.

  • aniie415 It is the a correct English sentence, isn't it?
  • No, not exactly.
  • For one thing, you need to start with a capital letter and end with a period.
  • Also, you have the mistake called a comma splice.
  • You have connected two sentences with nothing more than a comma.
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aniie415It is the a correct English sentence, isn't it?

No, not exactly. For one thing, you need to start with a capital letter and end with a period. Also, you have the mistake called a comma splice. You have connected two sentences with nothing more than a comma. And then there's "run down", a usag

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