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Rita Ngan Posted 6 years ago
Grammar

It is not urgent. Please comment grammar and sentence structure.

Dear Walter,

Please feel free to contact Antony at 5555 6666 directly for this Draft. He would like you to reconcile those highlighted figures including pink, blue and yellow which are shown on the top of the file.

Thanks and regards,

Rita Ngan

  

Top answer

Just in case that was a real phone number, I changed it. It's best not to put anyone's real phone number online for all the world to see. Use something obviously made-up with lots of repeated digits.

  • Just in case that was a real phone number, I changed it.
  • It's best not to put anyone's real phone number online for all the world to see.
  • Use something obviously made-up with lots of repeated digits.
  • Write 'draft' instead of 'Draft'.
  • Otherwise, fine.
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Just in case that was a real phone number, I changed it. It's best not to put anyone's real phone number online for all the world to see. Use something obviously made-up with lots of repeated digits.

Write 'draft' instead of 'Draft'.

Otherwise, fine.

CJ

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