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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that nay child can be tauht to become a good sports person or musician. DISCUSS both...

Some children have the makings of a genius about singing, dancing, sports,etc. Others are no like that. Personally, I agree with the idea: any child can become a genius, a good person in every field.

First, "Diligence is the mother succees". Some people are born with certain talents, which is a good standards, but it's not enough. If genius wants to be success, they need to learn more. Talents help them to learn easier and knowledge helps them to improve talents. For example, G-Dragon is a famous singer, musician with the makings of genius. When he was a child, he was very confident and people believed he would be a cool celebrity. Now, he is so famous wih making the music but a lot people don't know how he trained as an intern. He trained ten years, which a times was very hard, especially he was too young. But ten years into entertainment companies, he learned a lot of things and we have a great singer, rapper,musician today.

Second, although we have talents or not, we still need earnestness and diligence. If we are lazy, talents or yourselves will be rejected. In the shortsighted view, most of people have talents, who learn and live more easier then others are not. If genius doesn't learn or work hare, others will be better everytime. By attempt, everybody can be good people and make the world acknowledge. For instance, Ellen in the past had a huge depression but now, she is one of the best MC in the world. Ellen has much courage to come out on the most public of stages almost twenty years ago, what an incredible burden that was to bear to risk her career.

It's generally believed that some people are born with talents, who will do and learn what they easier and less difficulty. But I believe all people, all children have talents. Some children have talents, which show outside easier. Others's talents deep in the soul and brain. And we have a mission, which discover all of that.


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