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Perfect Stranger Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

It doesn't sound well enough to me no.1

Howdy,

Have a look at what I said to a friend of mine when she asked my what I was going to to this afternoon.

I wanted to go to Walmart to buy some products, then I thought I'd clean up my apartment, then... I was going to go to Tonlouwan. But I can change my plans if you wanna meet up.


  1. First of all, how can I avoid constantly repeating "I..." , "I..." in this sentence?
  2. Secondly, does it sound natural to say "clean up my apartment" ?
  3. Any other remarks?
Cheers,
  

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I'd love to see a better version of those sentences...
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Perfect StrangerI wanted to go to Walmart to buy some products, then I thought I'd clean up my apartment, then... I was going to go to Tonlouwan. But I can change my plans if you wanna meet up.
Correct me if I'm wrong but if we keep this sentence the way it is then it sounds like the person changed their mind several times. First, they wanted to go to a superm
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