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SHD Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Ist it correct?

As we discussed, please add this details to our web-based application in order to run the program accordingly as it was not found in our web-based application.
  

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It sounds a bit superfluous to me. I'd leave out some words. As (we) discussed, please add [these details/the following details] to our web-based application to run the program accordingly (or for the program to run accordingly ).

  • It sounds a bit superfluous to me.
  • I'd leave out some words.
  • As (we) discussed, please add [these details/the following details] to our web-based application to run the program accordingly (or for the program to run accordingly ).
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It sounds a bit superfluous to me.

I'd leave out some words.

As (we) discussed, please add [these details/the following details] to our web-based application to run the program accordingly (or for the program to run accordingly).

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