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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Isn't this clumsy?

Upgrade and renovation of the hall started in May, 2014 and on September 20 opening concert of the concert hall was held.

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Renovation of the hall started in May 2014, and on Septembe r 20th, an opening concert of the concert hall was held.

  • Renovation of the hall started in May 2014, and on Septembe r 20th, an opening concert of the concert hall was held.
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Renovation of the hall started in May 2014, and on September 20th, an opening concert of the concert hall was held.

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