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Uktous Posted 16 years ago
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Is who will take the risk
Hi,
Background:
Kid investment plan A: Mother needs to pay extra money if the investment account balance drops below $100.
Kid investment plan B: Father needs to pay extra money if the investment account balance drops below $100.
Question:
Can I use "is who will take the risk"?
Sentence:
The difference between 2 plans is who will take the risk of paying extra money.
Thanks
Background:
Kid investment plan A: Mother needs to pay extra money if the investment account balance drops below $100.
Kid investment plan B: Father needs to pay extra money if the investment account balance drops below $100.
Question:
Can I use "is who will take the risk"?
Sentence:
The difference between 2 plans is who will take the risk of paying extra money.
Thanks
Top answer
The whole phrasing sounds rather casual and vague for the subject matter, and financially unmanageable-- who's to say who paid or did not pay? These plans are poorly conceived.
- The whole phrasing sounds rather casual and vague for the subject matter, and financially unmanageable-- who's to say who paid or did not pay?
- These plans are poorly conceived.
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The whole phrasing sounds rather casual and vague for the subject matter, and financially unmanageable-- who's to say who paid or did not pay? These plans are poorly conceived.
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