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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Is WHEN ok here?

The man leaned in for another kiss, when the woman pulled away again.

Is this okay?

  

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anonymous The man leaned in for another kiss, when the woman pulled away again. Is this okay? I'd say "and" instead of "when".

— CalifJim

  • anonymous The man leaned in for another kiss, when the woman pulled away again.
  • Is this okay?
  • I'd say "and" instead of "when".
  • I don't understand exactly what shade of meaning you're trying to evoke by using "when".
  • CJ
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anonymous

The man leaned in for another kiss, when the woman pulled away again.

Is this okay?

I'd say "and" instead of "when". I don't understand exactly what shade of meaning you're trying to evoke by using "when".

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