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Rommel Posted 9 years ago
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Is 'when' correctly used in the sentence? If not, how can I make it right?

Is when correctly used in the sentence? If not, how can I make it right?

Probably, there are children who nurse hatred against their parents due to frustrating experiences such as when they receive disciplinary sanctions for misbehavior or when they are not given money or when they are prohibited from hanging out with friends.

  

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Rommel when they receive disciplinary sanctions Change that to 'when they are disciplined'.

  • Rommel when they receive disciplinary sanctions Change that to 'when they are disciplined'.
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Rommelwhen they receive disciplinary sanctions

Change that to 'when they are disciplined'.

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