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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Overall 3098 calls were received and 710 psychological consultations were provided. In 149 cases psychological consultations were provided to those who have been subjected to violence. In 91 of these cases assistance and support were provided to person subjected to emotional violence, in 19 cases – sexual violence and in 26 cases – physical violence.
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Overall 3098 calls were received and 710 psychological consultations were provided. In 149 cases psychological consultations were provided to those who have been subjected to violence. In 91 of these cases assistance and support were provided to person subjected to emotional violence, in 19 cases – sexual violence and in 26 cases – physical violence.
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Anonymous Is underlined part okay in here? Yes, but there are other parts with issues.
- Anonymous Is underlined part okay in here?
- Yes, but there are other parts with issues.
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AnonymousIs underlined part okay in here?Yes, but there are other parts with issues.
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In 91 of these cases, assistance and support were provided to persons subjected to emotional violence, in 19 cases – sexual violence and in 26 cases – physical violence.
The sentence above is still not clear. The numbers don't add up. Perhaps you meant this:
Assistance and support were provided in 91 cases of emotional violence, 19 of sexual violence and 26
The sentence above is still not clear. The numbers don't add up. Perhaps you meant this:
Assistance and support were provided in 91 cases of emotional violence, 19 of sexual violence and 26
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