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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is underlined part correct?
Hello!
Is underlined part okay? Any other way to say it?
The company and association agree on cooperation in popularization of mountain ski sport throughout the ski season of 2014/2015 and on mutual exchange of advertising and informative materials.
Thanks!
Is underlined part okay? Any other way to say it?
The company and association agree on cooperation in popularization of mountain ski sport throughout the ski season of 2014/2015 and on mutual exchange of advertising and informative materials.
Thanks!
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No, this is awkwardly formal (as is the whole sentence). Be more simple. For example.
- No, this is awkwardly formal (as is the whole sentence).
- Be more simple.
- For example.
- The company and the association agree to cooperate in popularizing the sport of mountain skiing throughout the 2014/15 ski season, and will exchange advertising and informational materials.
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No, this is awkwardly formal (as is the whole sentence). Be more simple. For example.
The company and the association agree to cooperate in popularizing the sport of mountain skiing throughout the 2014/15 ski season, and will exchange advertising and informational materials.
The company and the association agree to cooperate in popularizing the sport of mountain skiing throughout the 2014/15 ski season, and will exchange advertising and informational materials.
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Doctor DThe company and the association agree to cooperate in popularizing the sport of mountain skiing throughout the 2014/15 ski season, and will exchange advertising and informational materials.The words I have underlined need to be 'to exchange'. The parties have agreed to cooperate ... and to exchange... .
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