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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is "to" correct here?

Hi!

Is the underlined "to" correct here?
Any other suggestions?

During the night to May 7 he complained that it feels like something is breaking in his body, he was also pale and struggled with breath.

Thanks!
  

Top answer

" You've got a comma splice at "body,"; fix it with a semi-colon or a conjunction. Or make it two sentences.

  • " You've got a comma splice at "body,"; fix it with a semi-colon or a conjunction.
  • Or make it two sentences.
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"night of" not "night to"
The action is past so "it felt" and "was breaking."

You've got a comma splice at "body,"; fix it with a semi-colon or a conjunction. Or make it two sentences.

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