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Creativeguru Posted 10 years ago
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In the coming years, we envision that Upfront Holistic Healing will be the leading company that serves every individual with healing through body, mind and soul with the help of different therapeutic healing techniques. Over 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of Upfront Holistic Healing which is a company powered by Medical Science to introduce healing without the help of Medicine.
  

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Creativeguru Over 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of Upfront Holistic Healing which is a company powered by Medical Science to introduce healing without the help of Medicine. I don't understand that sentence. Rewrite it using clearer language.

  • Creativeguru Over 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of Upfront Holistic Healing which is a company powered by Medical Science to introduce healing without the help of Medicine.
  • I don't understand that sentence.
  • Rewrite it using clearer language.
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CreativeguruOver 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of Upfront Holistic Healing which is a company powered by Medical Science to introduce healing without the help of Medicine.
I don't understand that sentence. Rewrite it using clearer language.
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Over 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of a company offering holistic healing without the help of Medicine powered by Medical Science. This is how Upfront Holistic Healing was started.
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Creativeguruwithout the help of Medicine powered by Medical Science.
That appears contradictory.
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Over 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of a company offering holistic healing without the help of medicine. This is how Upfront Holistic Healing was started.
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CreativeguruOver 5 years ago, we came up with the concept of a company offering holistic healing without the help of medicine. This is how Upfront Holistic Healing was started.
That works.

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