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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Tika passed away of old age in the winter of 420 AC, and Caramon followed several months later, the result of a heart attack on Midsummer’s Day of 421 AC that was brought on by unexpectedly seeing a time traveling Tasslehoff at the Inn.
  

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cboutin3 that was brought on by unexpectedly This, grammatically, is referring to Midsummer's Day of 421 AC. Is that what you mean? If not, you need to have a new sentence,

— Philip

  • cboutin3 that was brought on by unexpectedly This, grammatically, is referring to Midsummer's Day of 421 AC.
  • Is that what you mean?
  • If not, you need to have a new sentence,
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cboutin3that was brought on by unexpectedly
This, grammatically, is referring to Midsummer's Day of 421 AC. Is that what you mean? If not, you need to have a new sentence,
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Thanks, but that's not what I mean, does this revision fix that? Tika passed away of old age in the winter of 420 AC, and Caramon followed several months later, the result of a heart attack that was brought on by unexpectedly seeing a time traveling Tasslehoff on Midsummer’s Day of 421 AC.
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