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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Is this wrong or right ?

" hallo folk, it has been a long period Emotion: big smile

Just procure or so 1 million friend request lol ... unto my omnipotence unequal incur such an astronomical digits like this ! "

A friend posted this on his facebook , can you tell us what is worng with it ?

We are both non-native English students and we would appreciate all the help we would get . Emotion: smile
  

Top answer

Just about everything is wrong with it. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised text here.

  • Just about everything is wrong with it.
  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please try to fix them and post your revised text here.
  • hallo folk, it has been a long period Just procure or so 1 million friend request lol ...
  • unto my omnipotence unequal incur such an astronomical digits like this !
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Just about everything is wrong with it. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to fix them and post your revised text here.

hallo folk, it has been a long period Just procure or so 1 million friend request lol ... unto my omnipotence unequal incur such an astronomical digits like this !
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Thanks for the fast reply and this is what he sent me:

" Hello guys , it has been a long time . I just got about 1 million friend requests . Even with my superpower I am incapable of handling a huge number like this "

And I ask can you say " I am not capable to handle a huge number like this . " ? and why if it is incorrect ?
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Another question , how would you describe ( with an adjective , please ) his first post ? ambigious or illegible ? or what ?

It is worng to call his post ambigious , right ?
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"Hello, guys. It has been a long time . I just got about 1 million friend requests . Even with my superpowers I am incapable of handling a huge number like this."-- This is much better.

And I ask can you say " I am not capable to handle a huge number like this."? -- No, because English does not collocate 'capable + to + infinitive verb'. It must be 'capabl
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Thanks , Mister Micawber .

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