Is this written/explained well?
Hi teachers, is this written/explained well?
As the Asian man joined her on the stage, she greeted him with a bow followed by a respectful thank you hand gesture. He returned the gestures, then addressed the audience.
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Hi teachers, is this written/explained well? Yes. Here is a small edit.
- Hi teachers, is this written/explained well?
- Yes.
- Here is a small edit.
- As the Asian man joined her on the stage, she greeted him with a bow followed by a respectful "thank you" hand gesture.
- He returned the gestures, then addressed the audience.
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Hi teachers, is this written/explained well? Yes. Here is a small edit.
As the Asian man joined her on the stage, she greeted him with a bow followed by a respectful "thank you" hand gesture. He returned the gestures, then addressed the audience.
Clive
0This "Asian" is PC gone too far. You might as well say "Earthling". Was he Japanese or Israeli or Andamanese? If you are going to specify ethnicity at all, do so.
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