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A fitness coach, nutritionist, and grandmother to two wonderful grandchildren, Eva La Rouge has struggled with her weight for years. After graduating from the University of California, Los Angeles (UCLA), with a degree in Health and Nutrition, Eva discovered the ketogenic diet back in 2008 and now enjoys renewed confidence, health and well-being. When not looking after her two grandchildren, Eva likes to give back to society by volunteering as a fitness coach at her local gym in Santa Monica. It is here where she runs a series of workshops designed to help vulnerable women lose weight on the ketogenic diet. She has especially taught her students how to successfully incorporate alcohol into their lives by discovering a 'must know' happy balance between drinking and dieting - the best of both worlds!

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