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I am describing the river Acheron in my story.

The length and source of the river Acheron is unknown, although legend foretells it begins in Elysium; as the Gods cry, their tears pool together and flow out of Elysium as the river Acheron, in the clouds far above the mortal world where it flows downstream through enchanted woodlands; nourishing the various flora and flora, to the sundering; the point at which the kingdom of Maldur and the underworld of Tartarus meet; then meanders underground through chambers, caves and chasms to the primordial deity, Tartarus, who delights in bathing in these tears, for she believes that they have the power to restore her youth and beauty.