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I felt tired so I emptied my drink. Then I pulled out my wallet and looked down the bar to see the bartender busy serving some other customers. As I waited, impatiently, I called my roommate to make sure that he had remembered to leave the key under the doormat.
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I felt tired so I emptied my glass / I finished my drink. Then I pulled out my wallet and looked down the bar. I saw that the bartender busy serving some other customers.
- I felt tired so I emptied my glass / I finished my drink.
- Then I pulled out my wallet and looked down the bar.
- I saw that the bartender busy serving some other customers.
- As I waited, impatiently, I called my roommate to make sure that he had remembered to leave the key under the doormat.
- For slightly more advanced English, you could say ".
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I felt tired so I emptied my glass / I finished my drink. Then I pulled out my wallet and looked down the bar. I saw that the bartender busy serving some other customers. As I waited, impatiently, I called my roommate to make sure that he had remembered to leave the key under the doormat.
For slightly more advanced English,
you could say ". . . looked down the bar
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