Is this written in perfect English?

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Hi. Is this part of a scene in a script written in perfect English?

(Two woman are sitting at a table)

Jenny reaches into her pocket and takes out a small picture.

Jenny: Here's the proof.

Jenny takes a quick look at the picture, then slides it to Gwen, who picks it up.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

The first sentence lacks ending punctuation.

Anonymous · Answer

<p><b>women</b></p>

CalifJim · Answer

anonymous Is this written in perfect English?

Please don't ask this. There is no such thing as "perfect English".

Ask if it's grammatical. Ask if it's natural or idiomatic. Ask if it's correct.

Thank you.

CJ

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