Is this written correctly?
We will build your pool with our team of devoted employees who are dedicated to building your pool in a timely manner with superior workmanship.
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bee teal 22 We will build your pool with our team of devoted employees who are dedicated to building your pool in a timely manner with superior workmanship. Here's my take: The repetition (underlined) is what spoils your pitch. Try to substitute something else for the second instance, like 'completing the project'.
- bee teal 22 We will build your pool with our team of devoted employees who are dedicated to building your pool in a timely manner with superior workmanship.
- Here's my take: The repetition (underlined) is what spoils your pitch.
- Try to substitute something else for the second instance, like 'completing the project'.
- 'devoted' and 'dedicated', though not literal repetition, are also too similar in meaning, and there is no need to pad your sentence with one more unnecessary adjective, so I struck it out.
- You might also consider rephrasing that portion of your sentence.
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bee teal 22We will build your pool with our team of
devotedemployees who are dedicated to building your pool in a timely manner with superior workmanship.
Here's my take:
The repetition (underlined) is what spoils your pitch. Try to substitute something else for the second instance, like 'completing the project'.
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