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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Is this written by non-natives

Dear Diary,
Today while dreaming about places I want to visit, I suddenly was reminded of a place that I would NEVER visit: Strood Cemetary in kent. There are over hundreds of graves, making its the most haunted place of mankind. One day, I was walking there. I felt very cold, like frosty ice touching my body. I saw a dark shadow behind the tree. It was like a three-feet-tall child, galloping across the passageway. I stunted. Until I realised it was a ghost. I legged away from the cemetery at the drop of a hat. Also, I heard through a grapevine that there was people get killed by a ghost! I don't know if this story was true but this gives me creeps.

Is this written by non-natives? If so, what are the mistakes?

  

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mosja Is this written by non-natives? Yes. mosja If so, what are the mistakes?

— Anonymous

  • mosja Is this written by non-natives?
  • Yes.
  • mosja If so, what are the mistakes?
  • They are many.
  • What do you think they are?
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mosjaIs this written by non-natives?

Yes.

mosjaIf so, what are the mistakes?

They are many. What do you think they are?

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Yes., non-native.

One clue is some of the vocabulary is not appropriate, eg stunted. Another clue is that some of the idioms are not quite right, eg I heard through a grapevine.

Clive

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