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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is this wording understandable?

Hi there!

Is this wording understandable? Any modifications necessary?

Furthermore, the bank, acting in its capacity as a credit institution, when transferring funds in the amount of SEK 40 000 to the company,violated transaction limitations provided for in the Credit Institution Law.

Thank you! This is for my master's thesis!
  

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Too many commas, too many words! Furthermore, the bank violated transaction limitations provided for in the Credit Institution Law when transferring SEK 40,000 to the company.

— Mister Micawber

  • Too many commas, too many words!
  • Furthermore, the bank violated transaction limitations provided for in the Credit Institution Law when transferring SEK 40,000 to the company.
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Too many commas, too many words!

Furthermore, the bank violated transaction limitations provided for in the Credit Institution Law when transferring SEK 40,000 to the company.
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