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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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After spying on the meeting between Dahlia and Sylora, Barrabus returned to Neverwinter and informed Alegni on what he had discovered, while at the same time Drizzt and Bruenor traveled the countryside nearby searching for Gauntlgrym.
  

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After spying on the meeting between Dahlia and Sylora, Barrabus returned to Neverwinter and informed Alegni of what he had discovered, while at the same time Drizzt and Bruenor traveled the countryside nearby searching for Gauntlgrym.

  • After spying on the meeting between Dahlia and Sylora, Barrabus returned to Neverwinter and informed Alegni of what he had discovered, while at the same time Drizzt and Bruenor traveled the countryside nearby searching for Gauntlgrym.
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After spying on the meeting between Dahlia and Sylora, Barrabus returned to Neverwinter and informed Alegni of what he had discovered, while at the same time Drizzt and Bruenor traveled the countryside nearby searching for Gauntlgrym.

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