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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is this worded in the best way?

When Laurana and Gilthanas were reunited with their father, Solostaran, and elder brother, Porthios, Gilthanas was welcomed as a hero, but Laurana was treated as an outcast since she ran away from Qualinost in pursuit of a half-elf.
  

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I would remove the commas around Solostaran and Porthios.

  • I would remove the commas around Solostaran and Porthios.
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I would remove the commas around Solostaran and Porthios.

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