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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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In addition, the Red Wrack had broken out in all the port towns, which was a sickness that Tol immediately identified as the specialty of Mandes. Egrin had also recognized Mandes’s plague and had dispatched scouts to locate the wizard’s hideout.
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In addition, the Red Wrack, a sickness that Tol immediately identified as the specialty of Mandes, had broken out in all the port towns. Egrin had also recognized Mandes’s plague and dispatched scouts to locate the wizard.
- In addition, the Red Wrack, a sickness that Tol immediately identified as the specialty of Mandes, had broken out in all the port towns.
- Egrin had also recognized Mandes’s plague and dispatched scouts to locate the wizard.
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In addition, the Red Wrack, a sickness that Tol immediately identified as the specialty of Mandes, had broken out in all the port towns. Egrin had also recognized Mandes’s plague and dispatched scouts to locate the wizard.
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