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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The repair of an empty hut gave him purpose, and when it was completed, the Dom-shu sisters and Eli joined him there. With his injuries healed, Tol took up a stone axe and cut firewood everyday, making himself stronger and allowing him to unleash his anger on those who had wronged him. Tol taught the Dom-shu tribe how to improve their lives by farming the land and how to use better firewood that burned longer and hotter.
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The repair of an empty hut gave him purpose, and when it was completed, the Dom-shu sisters and Eli joined him there. His injuries healed, Tol took up a stone axe and cut firewood every day, strengthening himself and discharging his anger against those who had wronged him. Tol taught the Dom-shu tribe how to improve their lives by farming the land and how to choose firewood that burned longer and hotter.
- The repair of an empty hut gave him purpose, and when it was completed, the Dom-shu sisters and Eli joined him there.
- His injuries healed, Tol took up a stone axe and cut firewood every day, strengthening himself and discharging his anger against those who had wronged him.
- Tol taught the Dom-shu tribe how to improve their lives by farming the land and how to choose firewood that burned longer and hotter.
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The repair of an empty hut gave him purpose, and when it was completed, the Dom-shu sisters and Eli joined him there. His injuries healed, Tol took up a stone axe and cut firewood every day, strengthening himself and discharging his anger against those who had wronged him. Tol taught the Dom-shu tribe how to improve their lives by farming the land and how to choose firewood that burned longer a
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