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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Using powerful scrying techniques, Gromph discovered that the phylactery was hidden within the House’s temple, and gained entry by disguising himself. Once Gromph entered the temple, he battled the obsidian spider golem that served as the protector of the phylactery, and eventually defeated the formidable magical construct. Gromph found the phylactery hidden within the golem’s center, and once he overcame the wards that were placed on the magical stone, he cleaved it with an enchanted axe, destroying Dyrr forever.
  

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Using powerful scrying, Gromph discovered that the phylactery was hidden within the House’s te mple an d gained entry in disguise. Once in the temple, he battled the obsidian spider golem, the protector of the phylactery, and defeated the formidable magical construct. Gromph found the phylactery hidden within the golem’s center, overcame the wards placed on the magic stone , and cleaved it with an enchanted axe, destroying Dyrr forever.

  • Using powerful scrying, Gromph discovered that the phylactery was hidden within the House’s te mple an d gained entry in disguise.
  • Once in the temple, he battled the obsidian spider golem, the protector of the phylactery, and defeated the formidable magical construct.
  • Gromph found the phylactery hidden within the golem’s center, overcame the wards placed on the magic stone , and cleaved it with an enchanted axe, destroying Dyrr forever.
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Using powerful scrying, Gromph discovered that the phylactery was hidden within the House’s temple and gained entry in disguise. Once in the temple, he battled the obsidian spider golem, the protector of the phylactery, and defeated the formidable magical construct. Gromph found the phylactery hidden within the golem’s center, overcame the war

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