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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The two leaders decided that direct action against Geran would be too suspicious, but they agreed it would be in their best interest to have a spy watch his movements, which was a task that was given to Darsi’s pet, the spectral panther Umbryl.
  

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The two leaders decided that direct action against Geran would be too suspicious, but they agreed it would be in their best interest to spy upon his m ovements, a task given to Darsi’s pet, the spectral panther Umbryl.

  • The two leaders decided that direct action against Geran would be too suspicious, but they agreed it would be in their best interest to spy upon his m ovements, a task given to Darsi’s pet, the spectral panther Umbryl.
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The two leaders decided that direct action against Geran would be too suspicious, but they agreed it would be in their best interest to spy upon his movements, a task given to Darsi’s pet, the spectral panther Umbryl.

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