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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is this worded correctly?

FYI- Dahlia is the elf woman. After their visit to the farmlands, Drizzt and Dahlia entered Luskan, but the elf woman chose to not magically disguise herself until after they passed through the city’s gates, resulting in her being recognized as the individual who had killed the High Captain of Ship Renthor over a decade earlier.
  

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After their visit to the farmlands, Drizzt and Dahlia entered Luskan, but the elf woman chose not to magically disguise herself until after they passed through the city’s gates , so she was recognized as the individual who had killed the High Captain of Ship Renthor over a decade earlier

  • After their visit to the farmlands, Drizzt and Dahlia entered Luskan, but the elf woman chose not to magically disguise herself until after they passed through the city’s gates , so she was recognized as the individual who had killed the High Captain of Ship Renthor over a decade earlier
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After their visit to the farmlands, Drizzt and Dahlia entered Luskan, but the elf woman chose not to magically disguise herself until after they passed through the city’s gates, so she was recognized as the individual who had killed the High Captain of Ship Renthor over a decade earlier

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