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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this worded correctly?
Before returning to Waterdeep, Vajra and her friends traveled through a magical gate to Pellamcopse Woods, a plaguetouched forest near Waterdeep, where they were taken by the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now had wings and the features of a cat, to his home.
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Before returning to Waterdeep, Vajra and her friends traveled through a magical gate to Pellamcopse Woods, a plague-infested forest near Waterdeep, where they were taken to his home by the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now bore wings and the features of a cat.
- Before returning to Waterdeep, Vajra and her friends traveled through a magical gate to Pellamcopse Woods, a plague-infested forest near Waterdeep, where they were taken to his home by the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now bore wings and the features of a cat.
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Before returning to Waterdeep, Vajra and her friends traveled through a magical gate to Pellamcopse Woods, a plague-infested forest near Waterdeep, where they were taken to his home by the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now bore wings and the features of a cat.
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Thanks a lot, could I have the sentence ens like this instead?
where they encountered the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now bore wings and the features of a cat, who took them to his home.
where they encountered the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now bore wings and the features of a cat, who took them to his home.
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cboutin3, could I have the sentence end like this instead? where they encountered the Nameless Haunt, a formerly human wizard who now bore wings and the features of a cat, who took them to his home.No, that is awkward: the final clause is dangling.
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