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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Alhana watched over her father as he passed away and named her his successor as Speaker of the Stars.
  

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Alhana watched over her father as he named her his successor as Speaker of the Star s and then passed away.

  • Alhana watched over her father as he named her his successor as Speaker of the Star s and then passed away.
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Alhana watched over her father as he named her his successor as Speaker of the Stars and then passed away.

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