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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is this worded correctly and should I add the "s" to "demand"? Even the celestial beings of the Upper Planes, formidable as they were, would have faced destruction at the hands of the demons or the devils, weighed down by their alignments’ demand(s) for goodness and justice.
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Even the formidable celestial beings of the Upper Planes would have faced destruction at the hands of the demons or the devils, weighed down by their alignments’ demand for goodness and justice. You are trying your readers' patience: learn how to compact when you review your work.
- Even the formidable celestial beings of the Upper Planes would have faced destruction at the hands of the demons or the devils, weighed down by their alignments’ demand for goodness and justice.
- You are trying your readers' patience: learn how to compact when you review your work.
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Even the formidable celestial beings of the Upper Planes would have faced destruction at the hands of the demons or the devils, weighed down by their alignments’ demand for goodness and justice.
You are trying your readers' patience: learn how to compact when you review your work.
You are trying your readers' patience: learn how to compact when you review your work.
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