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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Determined to obtain the power for his own benefit, Zethrindor swiftly led the white dragons and ice drakes under his command to confront the Ice Queen, which was a situation that Brimstone foresaw as an opportunity to free his allies.
  

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Determined to obtain the power for himself, Zethrindor swiftly led the white dragons and ice drakes under his command to confront the Ice Que en, a situation that Brimstone saw as an opportunity to free his allies.

  • Determined to obtain the power for himself, Zethrindor swiftly led the white dragons and ice drakes under his command to confront the Ice Que en, a situation that Brimstone saw as an opportunity to free his allies.
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Determined to obtain the power for himself, Zethrindor swiftly led the white dragons and ice drakes under his command to confront the Ice Queen, a situation that Brimstone saw as an opportunity to free his allies.

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